tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2173408054965817352.post5241220770002455734..comments2024-03-15T09:26:02.796-05:00Comments on PROJECT MAYHEM: Characters Must Not Always Be What They SeemProject Mayhemhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05154342399869089664noreply@blogger.comBlogger13125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2173408054965817352.post-34966974616140653052011-10-09T16:10:48.143-05:002011-10-09T16:10:48.143-05:00I'm a little late to the game here. I watched ...I'm a little late to the game here. I watched half the video and then it froze up but I get the idea--you want to surprise your readers. The late writing teacher and author Jack Bickham used to say you want "unexpected but logical" things to occur in your stories.<br /><br />Thanks Matt. Now I'm gonna see if I watch the whole thing. He was in the middle of song when it froze.Paul Grecihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11340974339238587138noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2173408054965817352.post-24070098025056069022011-10-08T17:21:49.130-05:002011-10-08T17:21:49.130-05:00Mat, I really enjoyed this post. Everything about ...Mat, I really enjoyed this post. Everything about this guy speaks of character. From the song he chose to sing (Etta James would be a challenge for the best of singers), to his clothes, word choice (burrito slinger), to his need for a drink when it was over, to his holding his mother's hand as they walked off at the end. This reminded me of how small things can paint a picture so quickly and then actions can spin them on their heads. Thanks for the thought-provoking piece.Joe Lunieviczhttp://www.lunievicz.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2173408054965817352.post-21408994117094916482011-10-08T11:45:51.926-05:002011-10-08T11:45:51.926-05:00That was a hell of a surprise. Good set of pipes o...That was a hell of a surprise. Good set of pipes on him though :)<br />I like giving my characters little ticks and quirks that shows sides of their personality that you don't have to pronounce with any great detail. It's a subtle way of showing other sides of the characters.Jamie Gibbshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15168603412367448706noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2173408054965817352.post-69324302673720736652011-10-07T21:26:12.324-05:002011-10-07T21:26:12.324-05:00i actually saw that clip on TV. Crazy! Just becaus...i actually saw that clip on TV. Crazy! Just because i never have time for live tv and my DVR is full, so there's no taping new shows.<br />Finally, I love me some dialogue. It's my fav toolSarah Ahiershttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02795455714801965956noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2173408054965817352.post-41242902291884643042011-10-07T20:58:00.388-05:002011-10-07T20:58:00.388-05:00I've never seen this show, or American Idol or...I've never seen this show, or American Idol or anything, but the clip was really cool. <br />Just taking it all in. Learning.Kristen Pelfreyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03446593300584488022noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2173408054965817352.post-61510461250602558552011-10-07T16:55:04.460-05:002011-10-07T16:55:04.460-05:00Great post. I worry about my characters sounding a...Great post. I worry about my characters sounding alike a lot. I've had many revisions of my first manuscript to correct this. My next one I'm going to use some character worksheets for my main characters and see if I can make them contrasting enough so they sound different and are different enough so they don't sound flat. We'll see if this works.Natalie Aguirrehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03756087804171246660noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2173408054965817352.post-65428113545198864672011-10-07T15:04:40.662-05:002011-10-07T15:04:40.662-05:00Great post, Matt. That video is new to me. I haven...Great post, Matt. That video is new to me. I haven't watched the show once. Thanks, I enjoyed it. And you're right. That video is a perfect way to show, not tell, how to flip the script on the viewer/reader when it comes to characterization. Good stuff!Mike Winchellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11771482167997501541noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2173408054965817352.post-78535806646734866802011-10-07T10:23:50.944-05:002011-10-07T10:23:50.944-05:00Matt, you rock. You're your own X-Factor.
I w...Matt, you rock. You're your own X-Factor.<br /><br />I will spare you my rant on how hokey this reality TV trope is getting (but I now really want to see the obverse of all this: some amazing-looking human, dressed to the nines, who can't sing a lick.)<br /><br />You hit the nail on the head about how differently characters should behave around other characters. That's a sweet thing to remember. And dialogue is a great way to do itMichael G-Ghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07947421844294471304noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2173408054965817352.post-12981540762031547322011-10-07T09:09:46.931-05:002011-10-07T09:09:46.931-05:00I love this post and the video because it emphasiz...I love this post and the video because it emphasizes the importance of not writing stereotypical characters. I think I need a sign above my desk now- Make the Characters Surprise You.dee garretsonhttp://deegarretson.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2173408054965817352.post-87488032567476710042011-10-07T09:07:02.153-05:002011-10-07T09:07:02.153-05:00Great post, Matt. I think the video was a perfect ...Great post, Matt. I think the video was a perfect way to illustrate your point. :)Shannonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11640509596922335617noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2173408054965817352.post-38989289662303023602011-10-07T07:28:05.133-05:002011-10-07T07:28:05.133-05:00Oh great, get me crying, will you? That video was...Oh great, get me crying, will you? That video was like a perfect "Rocky" - humble beginnings, sincere guy, rising to the challenge, triumph, and victory walk with his mom. Can't beat it.<br /><br />And I think the judge was right about how the guy used how he looks - not in any misleading way, but just by going as exactly who he is and not dressing up slick and professional, he knew he'd make a greater impression.<br /><br />And what you said about interaction between characters reminds me of something Bruce Lee wrote, that "To know oneself is to study oneself in action with another person."Steve MChttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15026970188928733645noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2173408054965817352.post-11885186010536021582011-10-07T07:14:14.889-05:002011-10-07T07:14:14.889-05:00oh wow! great voice!
i'm always worried about...oh wow! great voice!<br />i'm always worried about the flatness of my characters! eeks!vic caswell https://www.blogger.com/profile/01218698236837610704noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2173408054965817352.post-7125548114522925772011-10-07T06:32:53.781-05:002011-10-07T06:32:53.781-05:00I have been doing an online collaboration on Blogg...I have been doing an online collaboration on Blogger with another writer for six freaking months now. Our characters are interacting every single day. We are learning so much about them, and adding new characters and new dimensions all the time. It's been extremely good for her, as she's writing a series, to dig deeper into them and bring up more facets of their personalities. And since I'm just trying to keep myself together and please The Man, it's keeping me sane and feeling creative even though I'm not doing much "real" writing.<br /><br />But what we marvel at is exactly what you are talking about: the different ways the characters express themselves when different people are in the room. They will say things to one person that they would never say to another. And when they are all together for dinner or something, certain characters go silent and others just start antagonizing each other, even though they really like each other.<br /><br />But when they get into a battle situation, they all have each other's backs. It's awesome. We have bullets, arrows, magic and feathers all over the place. (some of my characters transform into huge birds of prey when they're ticked off.)<br /><br />But, that's how I'm keeping it real now.Nighfalahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01745824744507928211noreply@blogger.com