Okay, I know that’s a weird title for a blog post. It’s a thought I had recently while reading a
book. And okay, I also know that’s a
weird thought to have while reading a book, so let me explain: The book was a historical YA set in
turn-of-the-century England. The main
character had lived in a small English village her entire life. No mention of her ever traveling, certainly
not to other countries or continents, and given the time period, she’d likely
have very limited knowledge of faraway places.
I mean, it’s not like she could Google them or anything. So when she ventured to muse that a certain
person in her life reminded her of a hummingbird, the first thought that leapt to
my mind was, Wait a minute, there aren’t
any hummingbirds in England! How would she
know what one looked like?
Now, I won’t claim to be an expert on hummingbirds, but I
have a certain fondness for them. I like
watching them flit around in the sun, pretty little shimmers of green and
blue. I have tried, with varying degrees
of success, to lure them into my yard so I might delight in their fluttery
forms. And when I bought my first
hummingbird feeder a few years ago, I searched online to find the best way to attract
these little feathered beauties. Thanks
to these online searches, I know that hummingbirds are drawn to the color
red—it reminds them of flowers—so tying a red ribbon to a hummingbird feeder is
helpful. I know that if I don’t have
store-bought hummingbird nectar on hand, I can make my own by boiling 1 part
sugar and 4 parts water. I know it’s
against Federal law to keep any part of a hummingbird nest or egg—yes,
really—as hummingbirds are protected migratory birds. I also know that hummingbirds are a New World
species, found only in the Americas.
Now, don’t get me wrong.
This is obviously a very tiny detail, not important to the main story
arch of the book, and I don’t fault the American author for slipping on this itsy-bitsy
factoid. If I hadn’t read up on
hummingbirds, I probably wouldn’t know they’re not in England either. I’m certainly not going to pretend that it
detracted from my enjoyment of the book in any way. Come on, I’m not that nit-picky. It did make
me think, however, how easily details can trip us up, especially when writing
about a different culture, time period, or geographic location. I suppose this is why research is so key.
Of course, getting the major details right is the most
important goal. Hopefully your slip-ups
will be so minor that either 1) most readers won’t even realize you’ve made a
mistake, or 2) the rest of your story is engaging enough that they are willing
to forgive you an erroneous hummingbird here or there.
What kind of inaccuracies have you found in books? And let’s be nice by not mentioning any specific
author names or book titles, please. Especially
not if the error is in one of my books ;)
It is VERY easy to make mistakes like that. Which is why it's great to have a whole publishing team behind you, helping you catch those mistakes. I just completed a grueling line edit with my editor, in which she questioned every detail of my 1867 setting -- cupcakes, shoes, bedding plants -- everything. Sometimes I was right, but lots of times she was right, and I was relieved she caught my error.
ReplyDeleteEven then, stuff still gets by. When my first book came out, my very first professional reviewer slammed me for using a single word 50 years before its time. Ouch.
I've been very lucky to have factual errors caught by beta readers and CPs. I can't think of a specific example I've caught myself, but I'm generally forgiving of details if the story and the characters are good.
ReplyDeleteI've been reading a dystopian YA and had the same reaction. It was a few hundred years in the future and their knowledge about our current civilization was limited, but someone looked like "frankenstein". Not saying it couldn't happen, but it distracted me from the story for a page or two.
ReplyDeleteI notice it when the dialog doesn't quite match up. When historical characters fall into slangy speech, or, more infuriatingly, when they adopt modern post-feminist ideals. It irks me when a pre-Romantic heroine is moony over true love or when a character from history is seeking self-actualization/achieving their dreams.
ReplyDeleteIn my first draft of Storybound, the characters were celebrating Thanksgiving one day and then the next day was Sunday. Oops. None of that is in the final version, but an example of when absent-mindedness rather than lack of research can produce errors.
I love this post, Dawn. I must say that, even though I'm English, I probably wouldn't have caught a detail like that. I guess I need to become a more critical and careful reader.
ReplyDeleteThis is a terrific example of the little things that can trip us up. I wouldn't have caught this one, though. I had NO idea there are no hummingbirds in England.
ReplyDeleteI can only imagine the attention to detail that must go into writing a historical, so yes, I try to be very forgiving if I come across little slip-ups like this. Any author could easily make the same type of mistake.
ReplyDeleteOh, I know what you mean--there is a potato metaphor right at the beginning of Shannon Hale's Book of a Thousand Days, which is set in central Asia, pre New World exploration. It bothered me all out of proportion, and I had a hard time trusting the book.
ReplyDeleteA few weeks ago my daughter, son-in-law and grandkids came to visit us in Texas. The girls had never seen a hummingbird. Not thinking much of it, after they went back I googled the question, ",Are there any hummingbirds in England" and came across this site. I found your site very interesting. I hadn't realized the magnitude of editing that an author has to I'm sure before their book is published. Interesting.
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