Okay, it’s true. I
lost the dog. I was somewhere on page 350 and suddenly realized- where is Ralph?
The last time I saw him was at the castle. Now that we are on the streets of
Cairo, the dog is nowhere to be found.
Luckily, we are in
the modern era and I was able to search the manuscript and find Ralph. I
brought him home- though I would have gladly offered a search reward if I had
been facing a perusal of ink-stained pages instead.
Has anyone
misplaced a character before? It is amazing how lost one can get in one’s own
book. I remember, during the The Ravens
of Solemano editing era, while waiting for my editor to send his usual litany
of detailed and ever-helpful comments, I was sent a brief email that asked if I
wanted to choose a birthday or simply have a character celebrate two birthdays
in a period of four months. Oops.

Marissa Burt’s super-awesomely helpful post, “Thoughts on Scrivener,” Monday, April 27,2015 (read it, if you have not already)
struck home for me. I am surrounded by little pieces of paper with notes I can
barely read, but which are desperately necessary to retain some modicum of
attention to names and places, times and events. To remember who went where and
when, I now have birthdays, names, histories, and spots of time on notes to
myself. I plan someday to follow Marissa’s lead and move into the 21st
century with virtual Post Its, but until then, I have paper to keep me on the
straight and narrow.
So, with the dog safely back in the arms of his boy, I am ready to send the
first draft of the third book in the Young
Inventors Guild trilogy to my editor- though pressing the ‘send’ button is
something I feel like offering a reward for someone else to do.
Eden, I can empathize as I have lost characters along the way too! What I do now is create character worksheets for each character that also includes their character arc throughout the story. Then in revision I search for their name in the manuscript and read just their scenes to make sure it all matches up.
ReplyDeleteGreat advice, Donna. I keep track of most characters- honestly, I don't lose everyone- but sometimes...there's the one who got away.
DeleteHa! This has repeatedly happened to me! I'll reach the end of a newly written chapter and suddenly realize, "Wait! Wasn't Mary Sue in this scene? I never had her say or do a darn thing!" But, as I am a revise as I go kind of person, I just head on back to the beginning of the chapter and figure out what the heck Mary Sue is doing.
ReplyDeleteIt's especially easy for me to lose non-human characters. (Does this make me a specist?) There's one in the upcoming Morrigan's Curse who I consistently had to go back and insert into the scenes where he's supposed to be present even though I forgot all about him while I was writing that first draft. :)
I also have great CPs who never fail to point out that I forgot to mention poor Whats-his-name. Again.
Yes,indeed, Dianne, it is funny when you suddenly turn around and realize that someone has been in the room for two chapters and never said a word!! Perhaps 'funny' is not the word I'm looking for...(??) Sometimes I wish those MIA characters would just say 'Um, excuse me, but I'm here, too' or something. Thanks for sharing!
DeleteGreat post, great comments!
ReplyDeleteThanks, Michael! Great comments, indeed!
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