With the galleys of THE EIGHTH DAY mailed back to the publisher and revisions of Book 2 sent to my editor, the time came to face Book 3. So I called on my characters for help ...
Dianne: Hello, team! Glad to have you all back for Book 3 in
this series – and to the new characters, welcome. I assume you’ve seen the
proposed outline for the next book, and ...well ... you know I’m not very good with
outlines. But after two books, we’re used to working together, so I figure you guys will know where I’m going astray.
MG Protagonist: Well, there’s something majorly wrong with
the climax. In the first book, we saved the world. I mean, the Villain was this close to succeeding. (holds up his fingers a millimeter apart) And in the
second book, you backed off from that. There was plenty of exciting stuff, all
right – my identity was at stake, and my two YA friends’ lives were in danger … But it was all very personal.
YA Character 1: Yeah, he’s right. Personal stakes were okay for Book 2, but in Book 3, we’ve got to get back to saving the world.
Dianne: But the New Villain has an evil plan … That's End of the World stuff right there.
YA Character 2: And you have us stopping him while he’s still three or
four steps away from succeeding. Not very scary.
Dianne: I see your point.
New MG Character: If you let the New Villain get a little closer to success, he’s going to have to involve me.
I’m going to have to make up my mind which side I’m on. Won’t that solve the
problem you’re having with my character arc?
Dianne: You’re right. It will! Good idea!
New Villain: I object to my cartoonish nature. You did
everything but give me a cape to swoop and a mustache to twirl. Can’t you
provide me with some depth?
Dianne: Not in the outline, buster. You’re going to have to
develop your personality on the page, just like everybody else here.
YA Character 1: Yeah. You should have seen how she had me planned in her outline for Book 1.
But I set her straight by the end of the first draft.
Secondary MG Character: Hey, how come I don’t show up until the middle of the book? I was beginning to think I didn’t
have a part!
Dianne: We couldn’t have a story without you! Readers simultaneously love you and
want to strangle you. But you aren't needed until this part.
Secondary MG Character: But after you bring me in, I’ve got
nothing to do. I don’t even see my name mentioned in the climax!
Dianne: I didn’t know how I was going to use you in the
climax of Book 1 either, but I brought you along for the ride – and when the time
came, I discovered what you needed to do. Trust me. You’re my wild card. When
it’s time to use you, I’ll know.
Secondary YA Character: Now it’s my turn to complain. What’s
this about me possibly dying?!
Dianne: It’s the third book. There should be casualties. We
can’t just kill off bad guys and lose none of our own. What do you think this
is, the Twilight series?
Secondary YA Character: But why me? Do you know how many
times I’ve saved his life or bailed him out of trouble? (points at YA Character 1)
Dianne: That’s kind of why you have to go. That and your
unrequited feelings for him.
YA Character 1: (holds his hands up) Hey, don’t kill her off for the sake of my character arc. I don’t want to take
the rap for that!
MG Protagonist: I don’t think it’s fair for you to kill her
as a cheap emotional trick.
Secondary YA Character: I refuse to be the All is Lost
Moment! (starts cleaning her weapons in a threatening manner)
Dianne: I wouldn’t waste you like that. If you go, it will
be a Turning Point – a Courageous Sacrifice for your friends. Otherwise, I won’t
do it. Deal?
Secondary YA Character: (puts away her weapons) Deal. I’m never going to win his
heart away from her anyway. (shoots a
dirty glance at YA Character 2) I might as well go out in a Blaze of Glory.
YA Character 2: (under her breath) Please do.
MG Protagonist: Hey, the ending scene is all right by the way. Good job there. All that mushy stuff between the YA characters
is over and it’s back to me. Me and my MG friends and How I’ve Grown Up Since Book 1. But there’s
still room for more, know what I mean? I’m only in eighth grade after
all.
Dianne: That’s what we’re working toward, then. That ending.
Okay, folks. Let me mull over the World Stakes Climax and New MG Character's arc, and we’ll meet back here
for Chapter 1 in a couple days. We can do this. Right?
Right? Cross your fingers for me, PM readers. I hope I can
do this!
Good luck with it, Dianne. This was a fun discussion and hope it helped you figure it out. I'm impressed with all the writing you're getting done with working.
ReplyDeleteIt actually did help me sort a few things out in my mind!
DeleteLove the conversation with your characters. When they get in their say, things tend to get very adventurous. And from this talk, looks like the adventure is going to be world-ending grand. Best of luck with it :-)
ReplyDeleteYup. Nothing less than End of the World stakes will do. It was really a slap in the face for me to realize my current plan left the villain too far away from succeeding to really excite the readers -- especially compared to the first book.
DeleteFun post! As a fellow-pantser, I loved it!
ReplyDeleteThank you, Braden!
DeleteI CAN outline. But as you see, I'm just not very good at it. :)
Looks like your characters are leading you in the right direction (or in the the direction that will take you to the right one if you don't get there this time through).
ReplyDeleteIn fact, can you send them over when they're through with you to talk to mine??
Sure, I'd be happy to send them over. They are awfully bossy, though.
DeleteI LOVE THIS! It's a complete eye-opener. I sometimes "interview" characters, but have never thought of/allowed such a free-wheeling discussion. I may now have a new tool for my writing toolbox!
ReplyDeleteMichael, this isn't the first time I've interviewed the cast. It's mostly for fun (and blog-fodder) but you'd be surprised how often I learn something from it!
DeleteThis is awesome.
ReplyDeleteThanks, Matt!
DeleteA fun post- I like the mix-up of mg characters and YA ones!
ReplyDeleteThanks, Leandra!
DeleteI really enjoy this MG adventure with the YA characters serving as mentors. It has been a lot of fun to write!
I have conversations with individual characters, often when I am out on a run, but have never convened the whole crew. Very cool!!!
ReplyDeleteThanks, Paul! It is fun to take all the characters out and play with them! :)
DeleteHa ha ha! "What do you think this is, the Twilight series?" Good one, Dianne! And of course you can do this! Your characters are leading you there.
ReplyDeleteThanks, Joanne. I am betting you can identify some of these characters, too ...
DeleteNo fair! I want my characters to talk to me and help with plot and arc, but I get didly-squat! Your characters sound funny and smart, and I can't wait to see what they're going to do in all your books. :-)
ReplyDeleteLexa, if your characters won't talk to you, maybe you should see if they will talk to each other!
DeleteWhat do you think this is...the Twilight series? Bwahahaha! Whew! At least there were any mention of sparkles. ;) This was too fun.
ReplyDeleteCrystal, No sparkles whatsoever in my book. And ... sorry to say ... there really ought to be casualties on both sides in a World Stakes Scenario.
DeleteWhat a fun post! My characters rarely carry on reasonable conversations with me; they prefer to bug me in the middle of the night when I'm trying to sleep.
ReplyDeleteSusan, well I hear from them in the middle of the night, too ...
DeleteCute. Love it. Don't you love it when the characters talk to you? Okay, maybe not all the time. Lol! Great post.
ReplyDeleteThanks, Mina! I love it when my characters talk to me.
ReplyDeletePeople think I'm crazy when they catch me talking back.
LOL! I'd tell you what my characters say to me, but this is "MG"-rated post. ;)
ReplyDeleteHa, ha, Linda! Having "met" your characters -- I bet they do!
DeleteSo fun! I LOVE this. I might need to sit down and have a real talk with my NaNo characters. We have some cardboard to push out of and I'm not totally confident where I'm going (shocker, right?)
ReplyDeleteSo fun!