Since it’s President’s Day, I thought I’d post about one of
my projects involving a follow-up story to WILDFIRE RUN, my book about a
president’s son who gets trapped at Camp David after a natural disaster.
Basically, I feel as if I’ve been breaking my brain trying
to plot out a sequel, so to help my poor struggling thought process, I finally
made up a list of important elements. I hope this will help other plotters in
the same situation.
I’ve discovered the character of a president’s son doesn’t
lend himself to lots of adventures, because he’s surrounded by people
protecting him all the time. I had to come up with plausible reasons he could
be put in danger again and be the one to figure out how to get himself out of
it. This is true of many ordinary kid characters. Your regular kid is not going
to find treasure map after treasure map, or thwart jewel thieves multiple
times, so this may be where the writer has to veer off in a bit of a different
direction.
Some aspects of a sequel need to be familiar, because readers
want that continuity, and they want a sense of feeling they know a character already.
Other aspects need to be brand new, to give the readers a surprise, and to keep
away from falling into predictability. Here’s what I’ve determined I absolutely
have to keep in mind as I’m plotting:
What elements of a
plot will readers expect to see repeated in a new book: (action, friendship,
humor, etc.)
This is the most obvious part of a sequel, but it’s so
important, it doesn’t hurt to keep it right out in front. In my case, this was
easy to figure out. My new book has to include a lot of action and adventure.
What element/character
is going to make the plot feel different from the earlier book?
I thought about doing another outdoor adventure, but decided
it would be too predictable, so I’m moving into more of a thriller with bad
guys mode. It will still have action and adventure, but I want to keep the
reader guessing.
I’m also adding a new character. I think this is a great way
to keep a sequel fresh. The reader knows how the original characters interact
with each other, so putting a new character in their midst will add more
interest, and maybe even shake up comfortable relationships.
Besides the main
character, what other characters will readers want to see?
I knew I had to include my main character’s two best
friends, so that made me plot it carefully to have them included in a realistic
way. I also know many of my readers love the main character’s dog, Comet, but
he’s a little harder to include. At the moment, he appears in the opening
chapter to give that sense of familiarity, but he can’t take part in most of
the rest of the story. I’m hoping it will be enough.
What traits of
characters will readers expect to see? (This is so important. I’ve
discovered in my own reading that I want to recognize character traits or
interactions that remind me of previous books. It helps make me a part of that
world.)
My main character, Luke, is prone to act before he thinks,
so I wanted to put that in, but his real distinction lies in his ability to
think up crazy solutions to solve seemingly impossible problems. It’s hard to
think these up, but I know they have to be there, so I’m spending a lot of time
thinking about this. Luke’s friends have their own important roles, and these
have to be woven into the plot as well. Callie is the practical one, who solves
problems the boys sometimes can’t, because they tend to get too elaborate in
their ideas. Theo is the fact kid, who knows important details the others don’t.
So in writing all this down, it’s made the plotting seem a
little less overwhelming. I’m not there yet, but I’m hoping that by spending all the
time upfront planning, I will end up with a story that doesn’t need major
rewriting. So I'm off for more plotting. Good luck to all those out there attempting the same.
~ Dee Garretson
I loved this insight into your process, Dee. Best of luck coming up with an exciting sequel to WILDFIRE RUN.
ReplyDeleteThanks, Michael! I'm determined to get it right, no matter how long it takes.
DeleteSounds like a fun project, Dee! It was interesting to get a peek into your thought process.
ReplyDeletebraden, sometimes it feels less like a thought process and more like random grasping at threads. :)
DeleteI'm writing my sequel at the moment and I can't tell you how useful this was. THANK YOU :)
ReplyDeleteI'm so glad! Good luck.
DeleteGreat post, Dee. I'm in the beginning stages of a sequel, just the thinking stage. (I'd love to read the Sequel to Wildfire Run!!)
ReplyDeleteIf you're like me, you're finding the thinking stage takes so much longer in a sequel.
DeleteYes, Dee. We are with you. As I ride camels through the streets of my third Young Inventors Guild book, I will think of you post- Camp David!
ReplyDeleteOoooh, camels! Nice! What kid doesn't want to ride a camel? (What adult who has never ridden one, want an excuse to try?)
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